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//Theme from right after you and Ludwig started dating//

A few months after you and Ludwig had started dating , you come home to him sitting on the couch watching tv. You sneak over and nuzzle him "Hi Ludi~" you purr into his ear watching him jump and turn around as you giggle. He huffed but soon kissed you lovingly "Hello" he said after he had pulled away. "Did you remember vhat today vas?" He asked with a excited tone. You nod and giggle "Of course silly! It's your birthday , and like I said last time , you get to choose your gift , so what will it be?" You ask with a innocent look and your German boyfriend smirked darkly "I vant to fuck like dogs tonight~" He whispered into your ear making you blush darkly.

The German had slid a hand up your shirt making you quiver and purr. You both blink hearing giggling and you tense , reconizing the voices "FRANCIS! GILBERT! ANTONIO!" you yell and the French man squeaked , falling from behind the couch. Ludwig stared and moved away from you and grabbed a pot and yelled "GET THE HELL OUT OF MY HOUSE!". The French man bolted out the door with Gilbert and Antonio following , not wanting to be murdered by Ludwig.

----time skip~----

Your 16 year old son blushed darkly while his father went on "And zat is how the first attempt to get your mummi into bed vent-" Ludwig stopped dead sentence while you smirk darkly "Why are you telling our child this?" You ask , pissed off. Ludi tensed and laughed nervously before going into his room , scared.

END

(LOL SORRY FOR ANY SPELLING/ACCENT ERRORS~ I SHALL FIX THAT LATER :D)
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:icontsutakarin:
TsutaKarin Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
I actually blushed at the proposal of sexy time with Luddy 0//////0
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kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
looks like it's idiot season again! better get out the hunting gear!~ *pulls out powerful recurve bow and hunting arrows* YOU GUYS ARE SO F*CKING DEAD YOU GUYS ARE GOING TO BE COMPOST FOR MY FUTURE GREENHOUSE!!!!! *chases after them like a psychotic predator, firing arrows into their asses*
and Luddy? we will continue the discussion of celebrating your birthday however you want later after i return home from hunting with trophies (meaning their blood on my arrows) *flushes at thoughts of later*
also, why are you telling our son that story? *brings out mini frying pan. taps pan into opposite palm. smiles innocently yet darkly*
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PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
Love the ending!!
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nyanmeowth Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Artist
>///< made me fangirl infront of my dad
Dad: what teh hell was that squeak?Me: uuuh nooothing
Dad: your blushing to -.-
Me: MEEEEHHHH Blackie! Cuddle fit mein father!
Dog: *jumps on father and begins licking him*
Me: good boy :D
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soldiergirlrenee Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
Great story!!!!
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XoXo-LoverOfL-XoXo Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!! I am reading this in class!! XD I almost burst out laughing!!!!!!!
By the way, great sequel!!

*goes after Ludi* Jou need jour punishment!!!!
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hetaliafreak0104 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
I actauly read this in class and and i just burst out laughing and my teacher is giving the WTF look. PS: its really quiet cause were taking a test)
Lol im so awesome😁
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XoXo-LoverOfL-XoXo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Oh my goodness!!!
I can't believe that I'm not the only one who read this in class!!

^^ yes, yes you are (but not as awesome as Prussia ;D)
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
oh lol xD Sweet and thanks xD
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XoXo-LoverOfL-XoXo Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Teehee~! You're welcome!! ^^ I just hope no one in my class saw me make weird faces...

O_O that would've been awkward...
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LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
LOL
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badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah , he better be scared. Were is my chain~ , great sequel by the way , laughed my ass off
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
yay :D *hugs* I'm just upset this is way more popular then mah art qwq
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badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sometimes when you write something totally badass , it happens. * hugs back * but keep doing what ever art your doing !! mah poems are better then mein drawings anyway..... Oh well !! ^^
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
lol x3 thanks for the support~
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:iconbadassgermanchick:
badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem!! your great at what you do!!
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
thank you qwq 
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:iconbadassgermanchick:
badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem!! * looks for watch button *
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
lol~
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moonlightsorceress1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Writer
1.) "I vant to fuck like dogs tonight" laughed my ass off. So not expecting that XD
2.) laughed my ass if at the end cuz it was just that funny
3.) you are a freakig genius XD awesome story
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
yay lol apparently everybody either snorts or laughs at it xD
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moonlightsorceress1 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Writer
With very good reason XD
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
lol
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:iconsymmetry-cat:
Symmetry-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"I vant to fuck like dogs tonight."

:iconbravoplz:
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
why does everyone comment on that line xD?
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Symmetry-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, for me, it was a bit unexpected and gave me a bit of a laugh. I dunno.
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
lol

hey I'ma go out a limb , do you like yaoi :x?
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Symmetry-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! SuFin is my OTP.
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
:iconspazhugplz: I need you to marry me right now you amazing person C:<
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:iconsymmetry-cat:
Symmetry-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sure. XD
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
do you rp ;D?
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Kitkat1099 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
XD omg I can't stop laughing at the end
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
lol yay xD

People still read this qwq?
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Kitty-chan3215 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
Your 16 year old son blushed darkly while his father went on "And zat is how the first attempt to get your mummi into bed vent-" Ludwig stopped dead sentence while you smirk darkly "Why are you telling our child this?" You ask , pissed off. Ludi tensed and laughed nervously before going into his room , scared.

This made me laugh so much xD You really made my day!~
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
LOL yay~ My sad attempt at making people happy worked :D
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Kitty-chan3215 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Lol, that attempt succeeded!~ I approve of this story! I award you with a 110 Awesome Prussia Points!
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Yeah :D
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:iconkitty-chan3215:
Kitty-chan3215 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Lol, yeah!~
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Yay xD!
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:iconkitty-chan3215:
Kitty-chan3215 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Lol, that attempt succeeded!~ I approve of this story! I award you with a 110 Awesome Prussia Points!
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applecows Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
I'm not sure why the line "I vant to fuck like dogs tonight" made me laugh but also quiver in excitement thinking this might turn into a lemon.
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:iconlollitacaramel:
LollitaCaramel Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
LOL yay someone who was thinking the same way as me xD

when I read the original I was all like "what if the reader was a man owo?" DUN DUN DUN!!! mpreg :D
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